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Aug 31 update:

The comic will begin updating again and will continue without break until the end starting in late Sept. Kickstarter backers of the comic (and PDF customers via Gumroad) will receive the complete story on that first update day as well as the digital rewards from the comic, but as usual it’s a bit more fun to read the updates live with a group of people :)

Thanks for your patience with me as I’ve finished making two books this summer, attended my first Worldcon, got engaged and been put through the wringer with health and personal issues. It’s been a wild season, but I can’t wait to finish the story off with you all!


Previous update:

Hello all~

First, the comic is nonfiction, but you already knew that

Second, been quiet because I’ve been working on like 3 books and 2 campaigns (fulfilling one, planning the other) over the past 4 months, as I’ve mentioned a few times… I also had to increase the number of pages in Mare (posted in the last KS backer update) so it ended up being a bit more work than expected, but will also have a longer finale than I’d original expected. Finishing a book is HARD. I’ve never done it before and didn’t realize how hard it is. Every cell in my body says don’t do this to them, don’t end the story, haha. But it’s nearly there, after many months of editing we’re sending the books to print in August. Late, yes, but I’m finally happy with it. I will be fulfilling all of the KS books before fulfilling preorders, but if you missed the amazing Kickstarter you can preorder the PDF or book for delivery in early 2019. If you’re holding out for a signed copy or any of the limited or hardcover tiers, those will be listed next year when I take stock of what rewards I have left.

Third, the Elements Anthology won an Eisner, so now I’m technically an “Eisner winning artist,” haha. My comic, Pulse, is posted for $2+ Patrons and up and is on Gumroad too if you like spending more money for less content. Personally I’d just buy the book cuz it’s got like 15 billion awards now.

Fourth, I’ll be at Worldcon76 next month in San Jose and am already looking forward to seeing some of you there

Finally, it’s just a fact of life that things take time to make, I want to make them, but I am one person who has never done most of these things before. Thanks to those of you who keep coming back to visit, but to save yourself the trouble, just use the RSS or the email notifications and I’ll bug you from my end when new stuff goes up. The comic updates will probably resume in Sept after SPX and after the KS for my next project launches. Once that project is off the ground I’ll be able to start updating here again with the final 35 whatever pages and finish this thing off for good.

As usual you can yell at me here but for the best yelling I suggest going to Twitter, where you can yell at me where I’ll get to see it and feel bad right away.

All my best,

Der

63 Comments

  • Eyesauce

    Ah hey, I was wondering if it was too late to enter the giveaway?? Because I’ve got some art but not sure if it can still count as an entry haha

  • rimmeh

    Is the dialogue in panel four coming from Mike? Is Mike interpolating what the rest of Levi’s speech would be based on how well he knows Levi? And Bex’s small smile is because he’s guessing correctly? (Just checking that I read that correctly.)

    ANYWAY! Don’t burnout! Take the time off if you need it! Your health and well-being are more important.

    • Zinc

      I understand it as being from Threvi, and understood only by Bex (as in panel 2); she’s just not translating it for Mike in that panel. Maybe because she thinks it’s not relevant, maybe because she’s just listening instead of translating concurrently, maybe she translated it between panels 4 and 5.

      • CosmicStresshead

        I think panel two picks up after Bex has started translating, and we see that Levi is speaking in the bubbles without quotations marks, and Bex’s translations are with quotation marks.

        I think what Levi says in panel four gives Bex pause for thought, and she doesn’t translate it. Maybe out of kindness for Mike. She might not want to raise the issue of how crazy and unpredictable human minds can be, for various reasons.

  • JJ

    Mostly @shing, just to be sure & out of curiosity:
    To Bex’ brain, Levi’s vocalisations directly register as English, right? So here she just repeats what she hears – i.e. for her it’s not really “translating”?

    • MIB4u

      That’s how I understand it, too …

  • MGin

    I having a bit of trouble wrapping my mind around the fact that this is truly about to end very soon… *sigh*

    • Luces

      Me too. But I really look forward to plung into “the Meek'” with a vengeance. Great things are looming ahead!

      • Shweta

        “Great things are looming” is such a perfect description of The Meek! I know they’ll be great, but I’m terrified :D

  • EJ

    Just want to say you are doing awesome work, and that I am eternally grateful for you and your comics!

    • Shweta

      +1

      (unless it’s possible to do like +20k because in that case +20k)

  • cami

    I really think that bex is just saying whatever she wants just to push forward her objective, she’s not translating at all…

    • awhorl

      Don’t think so. Threvi would attack her head if she tried something like that and really twisted the message.

    • Fawnet

      I tell you, that immediately crossed my mind too. But as much as Bex wants out, I don’t think she’s the type who would lie to make that happen.

    • Shweta

      …To me Bex seems to me like a *terrible* liar, have I forgotten an instance when she lies plausibly?

  • DukeBG

    Since there are no microchips in Threvi, his mind is a copy of the original, not literally the original. So it’s kinda obvious that The Original had to be, khm, destroyed. And he wouldn’t have memory of it, since the copy was obviously made before it.

    The decision to destroy The Original LEVi might’ve been made (or rather, announced) by Processor already after the copy was made. And it could’ve made Kalla mad, so Processor had to kill/reset her too. Thus she won’t remember.

  • alexikakon

    I started reading this comic when it first came out, lost track of it for a long time, and just archive binged the whole thing over the weekend, pleasantly surprised to find out I’d made it back before the comic was completed, but saddened to have juuust missed the kickstarter.

    I don’t have all the words for what I’m feeling, but I did want to say: thank you so much for sharing this work. It’s so beautifully done, and means a lot to me on several different levels, as a queer person struggling with mental illness, as a woman who wants more of an identity than being a mother and is frequently disappointed but not surprised to see the way people are so often ready to attack a woman (especially a woman of color) for not making the choices that have been ‘traditionally’ expected of them, and just as a person who adores not only how much you put into this comic, but how you interact with people in your comment section in such a sincere and patient way. I don’t know; I’m worried this will come off weird and convoluted, so tl;dr: I really love your work and appreciate you sharing it! Especially Kalla and Threvi, who are perfect in every way and their friendship is the best. :) Congratulations on all the cool things you have going on!

  • Rycheza

    Take all the time you need with finishing the comic! With so many tasks at hand I’m super impressed you’re able to manage it all and still have steam to draw, don’t overwork yourself.
    I commented on last page with a pin giveaway fanart entry and also tagged you on tumblr, but it isn’t listed so I’m not sure if you saw it. – just in case here it is again :)
    https://rycheza.tumblr.com/post/173012618507/im-sorry-for-making-kalla-a-chicken-shingworks

  • Solanuma

    :=(}}}»»<

    thrip

    • Duncan

      May the thrips be ever in your favour

  • brokenidealist

    I have this horrible thought that, at best, Kalla has lost a lot of her memory by being rebuilt by the Processor many, many times over the millenia — a little bit lost every time it reincarnates her. Because surely as an organic being, any single body can’t last forever. An even more horrible thought is that the Processor chooses how much memory to to put into Kalla’s body each time. But we also know that any memories made after the time of last contact with the neural sea aren’t “backed up” and thus can’t be transferred. Martian reincarnation is a lossy file format.

    Way to go on starting a publishing company for your work, Der-Shing! You are inspiring through your art in so many different ways. :)

  • Artie O'Dactyl

    Given the Processor’s powers of duplication and simulation, I’m starting to wonder about who might return to the base, and what lies the staff at the base might be told about the interior of the volcano.

    • hkmaly

      Given the processor’s powers of duplication as shown on that flower, I doubt he can do convincing humans.

      • Artie O'Dactyl

        Well, that depends … The flower was created on VERY short notice. But New LEVi has held up quite well. Was New LEVi created from scratch, or merely downloaded into an existing organism? And Kalla’s body — repeatedly re-created — was made out of meat.

      • Bradford

        It’s hard, when all you have to go on is reading someone’s mind. It’s a bit easier when you have access to an individuals DNA.

  • yee

    You are great, thanks so much for doing what you’re doing!

  • Spencer

    It’s nice for them to finally get a calm, relaxed discussion for once.

    • Fawnet

      Yeah, I just noticed that in the second panel, Mike seems to be lying on his stomach and playing in the dirt.

  • Ponyhome

    I have to wonder what Mike has on offer to go back to. His family is kind of a mess, his job prospects are a dumpster fire, and he’s not quite human, anymore.

  • DavidDahlbacka

    Mike can’t leave anyway, he doesn’t have a helmet. Unless thighfriend can process extremely attenuated CO2 into blood oxygen.

  • Eversist

    Congrats on your engagement! Exciting stuff. :)

  • Otis

    I love the sweet, charmed face Bex gives Levi. She seems to be leveling out and responding more calmly…

    That being said, I can’t even blame Mike for not wanting to leave. Even if he biologically could, though that’s it’s own discussion. He was close to killing himself, hated himself, and now he’s discovered a while new world and is literally covered in life, and feels a part of something. He’s lacked that his whole life.

    The way he’s adapted is telling of the peace and acceptance he wants himself to have, whether or not he he truly wants to leave. Character development, man.

  • Margaret Hogg

    In the top right panel, I didn’t realise Thevi was talking at first. I thought all those bubbles were coming from Bex. I think that added to confusion over who was talking and also “is Bex really translating or saying what she wants to?”

  • Ben

    Regarding Kalla’s memory after an unknown number of reincarnations, how complete it may or may not be, it might be worth considering the Struldbruggs of Luggnagg, described by that noted observer and narrator, Lemuel Gulliver.

    These near-immortals underwent progressive memory decay, so the older ones have no real idea of their actual age; Gulliver recounts that the most reliable method of estimating age is the ask them, who is the monarch? which tends to produce a guide to their coming of age.

    The older ones are increasingly isolated by progressive changes in language, so that many of those over the age of 200 or so cannot understand contemporary speech.

    Kallakore might have virtually no long-term memory at all

  • tyg

    hey! you’re doing an amazing job, der! we all believe in you, hopefully life gets less stressful soon!

  • Eversist

    Appreciate the update! Take care of yourself.

  • Jac

    Thank you for taking the time to update with us! You take whatever time you need. You’ve always been well worth the wait <3

  • a dude

    take all the time you need, thanks for the comics

  • Indedipal
    • Indedipal

      (it appears the comment bot mistook my punctuation for an HTML command. Let’s try that again…)

      *fistbump*

  • Kuggur

    Hi Sing,
    Just wanted to say, take it easy, your health is ( or at least should be) your main priority.
    Good things come to those who wait, I have no problems waiting for your next update ;) .
    Great comic (I think I told you before).

  • Kuggur

    Hm, “perhaps over time, Kalla’s memory has degraded signicantly more than mine has?”…
    It just dawned on me that this could be quite a significant statement. As it implies that Kalla’s memories have degraded a lot during the period that Thrip/Levi was down there. This makes me suspect our protagonists might have been down there for a lot ( A LOT) longer than they realise….

  • Cait

    Take care <3

  • Jonas

    take care Shing, hope you’re well.

  • Lost Yooper

    Looks like the European Space Agency’s MARSIS discovered an underground lake! No word if its populated by thigh friends, thrips, or Wollarians yet!

    • Eversist

      Man, you beat her to her update under the comic I’m guessing. ;)

      (BTW thanks for the update!)

    • SSR

      I also rushed here when I saw the news1

      (But honestly, at the rate the world is going, we could find alien life on Mars, and it wouldn’t be in the news for more than a week.)

    • Jumper

      I’m so excited and mindblown that I was alive to see this discovery omg

  • David

    “Finishing a book is hard. I’ve never done it before.”

    Didn’t you do the Meek book though?

    Perhaps the difference is that this is a complete *story*, whereas the Meek book was Volume 1, with more to come. Is that correct?

    • shingworks

      That story is not over, so yeah I guess technically some chapters are collected into a book but the stakes are non-existent compared to finishing off a complete self-contained story.

  • JJ

    Yelling is so nice. I like me a good yell.

  • Trianna UK

    Good to see an update, but please make sure you don’t burn yourself out! The way I look at it, worse comes to worse it’ll be an awesome Christmas present to myself. Hopefully it won’t take that long, but if I can wait patiently for a delayed game I can wait patiently for an amazing piece of work.

    Hope you take a day or two to yourself and enjoy the summer holidays.

  • Kuggur

    This comic was the first thing that popped in my mind reading the news about the underground sea on mars.
    The universe imitating art….?

  • TuesdayNightCompany

    Thank you for the update! I was super broke during the Kickstarter but I definitely want the book, so thanks for linking!

  • Corbie

    Der-Shing, glad to hear from you again on the comic’s web page! :)
    Take all the time you need to make this as great as it gets. I’ll wait as long as Kalla if need be.
    Most of all, take all the time you need for yourself and for having fun creating.

  • Magdalene

    Thanks for the update! Mare Internum was definitely the first thing in my mind when I saw the first articles about the lake on Mars, haha

  • Katie E

    Came here to *not* yell at you! Love the comic, going to love the ending nomatter when it happens. I never gave up hope checking on updates on “the meek” and was so excited when I discovered this comic too. Can’t wait (but..can actually wait, and will, until you have time! haha)

  • Some_Douchebag

    Shing, I was concerned you’d gone and burnt yourself out with all of the stuff you’re involved in. I’m not really angry, let alone going to yell at you*.

    *This is a lie. I am perpetually angry at literally everything.

  • tawny

    Hi I’m here to yell at you but in a good way, your comic is good and I love it and I’ll wait patiently for whenever you’re able to return to it.

  • Matt

    A podcast I listen to has a segment at the end where they talk about ‘mars news’ and it always reminds me of your comic haha If this is nonfiction I can’t wait for the ‘crossover’ episode of the podcast XD (The podcast is Dear Hank & John, for the curious, but I’m not sure if it has wider appeal)

  • LeDayz

    I’m so excited!

    • Paula

      Omg, saaamee. I’m a backer but I think I will read the updates on here – as Shing said, it’s fun with other people :)

  • SamuraiArtGuy

    Good Stuff is worth waiting for! Carry on!

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